constructed critism

1. criticism or advice that is useful and intended to help or improve something, often with an offer of possible solutions

2. the url is http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/Constructive%20criticism

3.

4. this web site helps me because it gives me the meaning for the words i dont know.

5. i have done construted criticism in my peer editing when i have to read others pappers and give either advise or tell them what needs to be tooken out of the papper.

obamas

The speech of a champion

If I was Barack Obama to me it would mean that to be a winner is to succeed at what you were aiming to accomplish and to accomplish it afterwards. Barack Obama is a prime example of a winner. A quote that he stated was that “A change is going to come to America". Which means he knows what he know wanted to when he was elected president and what his plans was for the United States of America. In order to be a successful leader and as a winner you must have a plan always a strategy or something the organizes how your going to win. Obama a very gracious man he’s a very kind and generous man gracious meaning courtesy and kind, I say that because he is and yet to be decided, but I strongly think that he is a man of his word and that he will do what he says he going to do. Barack Obama in my opinion is a winner he has did the unthinkable, unbelievable, and the indescribable.

The speech of looser

To me John McCain is a sore looser because after all that dirt about Obama after all those low blows. Such as the quotes "Barack Obama is going to raise taxes" after all his lies all after all those facts that were made up he still loss. He tried so hard to pull out his dirtiest tricks and lies he still loss. Also when try to play it off like he honor Obama after he lied, trying to make him look like a faker to America. I think that McCain is a two faced liar so I dislike him. I think that McCain a phony candidate and the republican group should have choose someone else to lead them in the presidential run.

physical properties - 10/30/08

1:a url is : Uniform Resource Locator; an address that specifies the location of a file on the Internet (eg, http://www.lib.fsu.edu).www.lib.fsu.edu/index.php

2:the web site gives me the information of what a url is and it defines the word and gives an example.

3:this helps me by giving me the information i need about url's

it doesn help me because some of the definitions are inncomplete and fragments.

this a picture below: